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I came two days ago back from a week at Malta with my girlfriend. The flight was the first one for me and I had the luck to have a seat at the window both times. I felt really impressing and I got a flow of inspiration and ideas. This was one of them.
Time Around 2 hours
Hope you had a happy new year! Best wishes for all
Edit
Changed some colors and lightings. Critique´s always welcome
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2480x3508px 3.96 MB
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactI love the lighting and the jet. In fact this is my favorite out of the 60 critiqueable I was just looking at on the last page.
The stile and subject of the work are pleasing. For me, it illustrates an interesting glimpse of a story about exciting yet smooth relationship between a pilot and a woman he likes.
One criticism I have is that the woman’s face doesn’t have enough character. I feel it needs more flair. Perhaps she could have a piercing, interesting hair or an interesting expression.
The color of the cloud is rich and despite it being an impossible meteorological formation you give the feeling of near sunset very well. I’m not sure why there is orange on the left side of the lock of hair by her face while the orange is on the right side of the thick line streaming from the jet. This makes the lower part of her hair confusing.
Overall I like your work very much and I look forward to seeing more of it.